The things that struck me immediately upon viewing the picture were two things. Firstly the blurred movement of the boats suggested that you did a time lapse shot, so perhaps you were on a pier using a tripod. I liked that alot. Secondly the poles divided the focus of my attention, which is the buildings in the background and that bothered me, although I am not sure there is a thing you could do about that. I would have preferred it there was a location where you could have perhaps framed the building with the poles while still being able to get the boats in the frame for the motion effect.
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